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liquid.silver
24-06-2008, 11:39 AM
I recently wrote a short story called The Transferrers: Part 1. It is kinda relevant to Comp 19, so I thought i might share it with you guys. Feel free to C&C. I will not be offended if you tell me about typos, actually i would like it if you told me if you found any.

If someone wants to use the story as a plot for a game, I'm open to the idea, ask me.

Get the story here: http://www.liquidsilver.5gigs.com/data/transferrers_part_1.pdf

SkinkLizzard
24-06-2008, 12:06 PM
Silver nice story, get more free time and finish it :)

liquid.silver
24-06-2008, 12:13 PM
Thanx. Actually it is finished. That's just part 1. I have plans for future parts in the pipeline.

liquid.silver
27-06-2008, 09:44 AM
anyone else read the story? think it could make a decent game?